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src/app/resources/views/template_raj.pug

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         meta(charset='utf-8')
         meta(name='viewport' content='width=device-width, initial-scale=1, shrink-to-fit=no')
         meta(http-equiv='x-ua-compatible' content='ie=edge')
-        meta(name='description' content='Hi, there! My name is Garrett. I am a self-taught software developer and speaker.')
+        meta(name='description' content='Hi, there! My name is Garrett. I am a computer scientist, software engineer, and speaker.')
         meta(name='keywords' content='garrett mills glmdev developer speaker flitter extollo student')
         meta(name='author' content=config('app.name', 'Garrett Mills'))
         meta(name='robots' content='index, follow')

src/app/resources/views/welcome.pug

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         .inner
             .hero
                 h1 garrettmills
-                p Hi, there. My name is Garrett, and I'm a self-taught software-developer and speaker.
+                p Hi, there. My name is Garrett, and I'm a computer scientist, software engineer, and speaker.
             section#about
                 h2 about me
                 .about-container
                     .img
                         img(src="/assets/img/profile.jpg" width=300 height=300)
                     .about
-                        p Hi! My name is Garrett. Welcome to my corner of the internet. I'm a self-taught developer and maker. I like to build software to improve the developer/user experience. I created the <a href="https://extollo.garrettmills.dev" target="_blank">Extollo</a> framework, <a href="https://code.garrettmills.dev/Noded" target="_blank">Noded</a>, <a href="https://code.garrettmills.dev/starship/coreid" target="_blank">CoreID</a> authentication server, and a couple other projects. I love to communicate my work, and help others pursue their projects. I write blog posts, create video tutorials, hold talks, and publish code from my projects in the hope that others will find it useful.
-                        p A bit more background: I grew up in the rural mid-west, and I got started by teaching myself everything I know. I'm a big fan of learning to code this way. I'm currently studying computer science at the University of Kansas.
+                        p Hi! My name is Garrett. Welcome to my corner of the internet. I'm a computer scientist, software engineer, and speaker. I like to build software to improve the developer/user experience. I created the <a href="https://extollo.garrettmills.dev" target="_blank">Extollo</a> framework, <a href="https://code.garrettmills.dev/Noded" target="_blank">Noded</a>, <a href="https://code.garrettmills.dev/starship/coreid" target="_blank">CoreID</a> authentication server, and a couple other projects. I love to communicate my work, and help others pursue their projects. I write blog posts, create video tutorials, hold talks, and publish code from my projects in the hope that others will find it useful.
+                        p A bit more background: I grew up in the rural mid-west, and I got started by teaching myself everything I know. I'm a big fan of learning to code this way. I completed a bachelor of science in computer science at the University of Kansas, and I'm currently a graduate student studying programming languages and formal methods at KU.
 
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                 section#work