From a1cc3176a3cc70fe160f8e9566f2575668513020 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hyperion-21 <69665635+Hyperion-21@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 10 Oct 2020 23:20:51 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Improved base-en.yaml translations for tips (#817)
* Update base-en.yaml
Updated spelling, grammar, and to a lesser extent the information of some tips.
* Update base-en.yaml
* Update base-en.yaml
* Update base-en.yaml
Applied most of EmeraldBlock's suggestions
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translations/base-en.yaml | 19 +++++++++----------
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/translations/base-en.yaml b/translations/base-en.yaml
index 7459e3f5..9d145999 100644
--- a/translations/base-en.yaml
+++ b/translations/base-en.yaml
@@ -1189,9 +1189,9 @@ demo:
settingNotAvailable: Not available in the demo.
tips:
- - The hub accepts input of any kind, not just the current shape!
+ - The hub will accept any input, not just the current shape!
- Make sure your factories are modular - it will pay out!
- - Don't build too close to the hub, or it will be a huge chaos!
+ - Don't build too close to the hub, or it will be a mess!
- If stacking does not work, try switching the inputs.
- You can toggle the belt planner direction by pressing R.
- Holding CTRL allows dragging of belts without auto-orientation.
@@ -1209,21 +1209,20 @@ tips:
- You don't need to divide up items evenly for full efficiency.
- Holding SHIFT will activate the belt planner, letting you place long lines of belts easily.
- Cutters always cut vertically, regardless of their orientation.
- - To get white mix all three colors.
- The storage buffer prioritises the left output.
- Invest time to build repeatable designs - it's worth it!
- - Holding CTRL allows to place multiple buildings.
+ - Holding SHIFT lets you place multiple buildings in one click.
- You can hold ALT to invert the direction of placed belts.
- Efficiency is key!
- Shape patches that are further away from the hub are more complex.
- Machines have a limited speed, divide them up for maximum efficiency.
- Use balancers to maximize your efficiency.
- Organization is important. Try not to cross conveyors too much.
- - Plan in advance, or it will be a huge chaos!
+ - Plan in advance, or it will be a mess!
- Don't remove your old factories! You'll need them to unlock upgrades.
- - Try beating level 20 on your own before seeking for help!
+ - Try beating level 20 or 26 on your own before seeking for help!
- Don't complicate things, try to stay simple and you'll go far.
- - You may need to re-use factories later in the game. Plan your factories to be re-usable.
+ - You may need to reuse factories later in the game. Build your factories to be reusable.
- Sometimes, you can find a needed shape in the map without creating it with stackers.
- Full windmills/pinwheels can never spawn naturally.
- Color your shapes before cutting for maximum efficiency.
@@ -1234,13 +1233,13 @@ tips:
- Building too close to the hub can get in the way of later projects.
- The pin icon next to each shape in the upgrade list pins it to the screen.
- Mix all three primary colors to make white!
- - You have an infinite map, don't cramp your factory, expand!
+ - You have an infinite map. Don't cramp your factory, expand!
- Also try Factorio! It's my favorite game.
- - The quad cutter cuts clockwise starting from the top right!
+ - The quad cutter cuts clockwise, starting from the top right.
- You can download your savegames in the main menu!
- This game has a lot of useful keybindings! Be sure to check out the settings page.
- This game has a lot of settings, be sure to check them out!
- - The marker to your hub has a small compass to indicate its direction!
+ - Your hub marker has a small compass that shows which direction it is in!
- To clear belts, cut the area and then paste it at the same location.
- Press F4 to show your FPS and Tick Rate.
- Press F4 twice to show the tile of your mouse and camera.